You belong with me - Chap. 1 by bluebran, literature
Literature
You belong with me - Chap. 1
Before reading, consider 2 things: this is my first fanfiction, and my first language is not English, I didn't even write this "thinking in English", this is a translation from my story written in Spanish, so I would be extremely grateful if you reviewed correcting and commenting on my grammar and vocabulary besides commenting on the story Thanks a lot!
THIRD YEAR
A faint ray of sunshine entered through the room's window and illuminated the girl's wavy and thick mane of red hair, which framed a pale, thin and angular face, sprinkled all over with tiny little freckles. She absent-mindedly scratched her delicate nose with the feather qu
James Potter and Lily Evans by Raineylovesyou, literature
Literature
James Potter and Lily Evans
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Lily Evans sighed. Being home for the holidays had it's up and down sides. The up side she could see her mother and father and have some of her mothers famous cooking. There were more down sides this year. One Petunia ignored her more than ever, two she couldn't see her friends, and finally Christmas break ment no James Potter.
James Potter an intersesting topic. The two had been made the heads this year to both their surprise, they actuly got along this year surprising everyine even themselves. Lily was falling for him and she had a feeling he knew it too. Sh
it all started with a dream it seemed to be in the middle of the night and madison was walking down the stairs it was so quiet she could hear the strong wind outside her house and which really scared her because her dad always fell asleep with the t.v. on in the living room after he had some beer that he smuggled in cause it made him act like an idiot when she got to the last step madison froze from fear but what was scaring her was.....well she didnt know what it was and then she heard it "Why do we always get stuck with this kinda dirty work" madison started shaking she recognized the voice but she didn't know where she had heard it before